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Six Years Too Late

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Where do you see my business headed? Tara, we’ve been out of business for 6 years. You might be getting ripped off and buying dated leads. But I expect that. What really irks me is the copywriting of your automated email; 23 cliches in 9 sentences. I’m not even including the one sentence that name-dropped 16 past clients. I’ll admit that I was finally won over in the final sentence where the word “mosey” was used. I still didn’t reply though.